In few lines and scattered words I crown you with stately fame - Great kings and queens in my tales Sing praises of your name. Robed in scarlet, precious stones You reign over my earth and sky; With words that leak from my pen I build your fort towering high. In awe and wonder for your being Countless words I weave and stitch - Spinning your unearthly charms, My enslaved mind you can bewitch. You fill the void in every paragraph - In my world's stage, you play all lives - A thousand deaths cannot strike you Like an ancient phoenix, you survive. In soft whispers, unfamiliar tongues I speak of my love so pure and true - Though the universe is in my grasp - My poetic loyalty lies with you. I have no story from rags to riches I have no seat in the hall of fame. If the three Fates favor poets in love, On the halls, I'll carve your name. You thrive in my poems and prose - What more can a commoner do? I wish someone would love me - The way I love you.
ยฉ Copyright: Leah Chrestien. July 2021. The post Crowning Glory| Poetry first appeared on The Ecstatic Storyteller. The author reserves the right to the content. No reproduction of content in any form is permitted without the prior consent of the author.
Simply wonderful!!!
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Thank you for reading. Hope you’re well. ๐
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You are so very welcome! I’ve missed you here ! ๐
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That’s so sweet of you. ๐ I was away for a while. Now I’m back and will binge-read your articles. Can’t wait !
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Haha, not at all! Yikes, I hope they do not disappoint!
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Unequal levels of love always hurtsโฆsometimes it can also be that some people find it hard to express into emotions their most inner depths, due to past hurt, insecurity and other reasons, but the sad truth is that it’s rare for two people to love each other with the same intensity, the all-consuming, lifelong-lasting type of passionate relationships. Most of us have to make do with glimpses and traces of true love and make it last or use our imagination and cry on the inside for the rest. In todayโs society, the fairy tale type of love is mostly considered overrated or inappropriate.
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Strange, how the best of poetry is often born out of the saddest of love stories. Unrequited love is a common theme and is the driving force behind pain and heartaches that blossom into world class poetry. While it is not always a good idea to romanticize suffering, it does evoke a fragment of imagination that weaves magic and gives birth to Yeats and Shakespeare. Rephrasing Oscar Wilde, we will always be in Love with Love and therefore, those that are willing to be chided for writing elaborate love phrases will always be termed as hopeless romantics – a risk that most are willing to take! While the expressions of Love differ and keep changing with age, there are also those that are fighting to keep Love’s flame alive and burning. Thank you for reading. ๐
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Beautifully expressed. Well done!
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Thanks Lynette :). Means a lot.
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This is a wonderful poem! I love the way you ended it in the final stanza.:-)
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Thank you for your kind words. Thank you for reading. ๐ Best wishes.
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heart pouring out in poetic form. Love returned only on the empty pages, we dare spill our feelings on.
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Thank you for your wonderfully constructed comment. ๐ That was so lovely. Thank you for reading. Best wishes.
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you are very welcome
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A great presentation and a nice flow through out! A poignant and rather sad ending.๐
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A great presentation and a nice flow through out. A poignant and rather sad endingโฆ
Another beautiful write Leah.๐
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Thank you for your kind words. It really helps me stay motivated. Best wishes. ๐
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You are most welcome ๐
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Gorgeous poetry.
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Thank you so much. ๐ best wishes ๐
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Are you a fan of history? Your poems suggest that mode?
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Yes, I enjoy unbiased history for sure. It is important to know the events of our past.
I’m not sure whether this poem suggests that mode. My poetic style (as I like to believe) is inspired by Romanticism and Gothic Romanticism but I try to avoid archaic English words.
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Youโre definitely a fan of that era it seems. Keep it going.
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I loved it! Beautiful. โค
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Thanks Deborah. Much love โค๏ธ
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So beautifully written. Really loved and enjoyed reading this!!
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Thank you. You’re too kind ๐
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