My feet are strewn with rose petals; Confetti rain on my jeweled crown; Graces pour in on my sharp ears - My cheeks beam in golden brown. From farthest corners I hear praises; Distasteful words are just a few; I sit in silence in your presence - But I hear no word from you. I dressed in the finest yarn of silk; I wore my hair in a flowing knot; Though the mirror didn't disappoint - To laud me, once again, you forgot. I turned heads wherever I walked; I strutted about in sparkling shoes; Those awed gazes meant nothing - For they did not come from you. You spoke of poetry you composed; For your many beloveds of old; With letters, roses, hugs and kisses - You robed them in purest gold. When I flaunt my finest jewellery, Dazzle in pearls and sapphire blue, They blind the rich, royal and elite - But their light doesn't reach you. You maintain your cone of silence; Nothing beyond making quick love; I wonder why you never let me go - As I lie naked staring up above. I gift you my love, time and youth; I glorify our love in shades of hue; When I ask you what went wrong - Your answers are short and few. You say your feelings do not waver; Your mind is as firm as a solid rock; I say I'm weary of your discrepancies - You react in utter disbelief and shock! We burn out in the trying test of fire; Together, we barely make it through; While I perish in the scorching flames - Iβll know I was never meant for you.
Β© Copyright: Leah Chrestien. August 2021. The post The Invisible Woman | Poetry first appeared on The Ecstatic Storyteller. The author reserves the right to the content. No reproduction of content in any form is permitted without the prior consent of the author.
Such a beautifully bitter-sweet poem, seeping in emotion. Quite excellent!!
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Thank you. π I scribbled it in just a few hours.
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That was a rich few hours indeed!!! π
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A difficult poem to read because of the emotions, but it’s also beautifully written.
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Thank you Priscilla. π Means a lot. Best wishes. π
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Beautifully written, very poignant. I think most of us have had a similar experience at one time or other.
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Thanks Lynette. I agree. The sentiments will resonate with many.
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I love your colorful and descriptive prose – perfect!
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Thank you so much for your appreciation. :). Means a lot. Best wishes. π
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You are most welcome!
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Beautiful, poignant and lovely.
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Thank you. I tried π
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So touching. Beautiful,
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Thank you Deborah. Best wishes.
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You are welcome.
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Sweet meaningful poem! πππ
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Thank you Priti. Much appreciated. π
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π€ππΉπππΊβ£οΈπMy pleasure.
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A very eloquent piece with a heavy emotional π€ charge.
A great write!πππ
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Thank you so much. π I’m following your poetry too. Love them !
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Likewise, thank you, catch you around.π
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So what seems to be the key component leading to your creative word descriptions?
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Ah that’s a question worth pondering upon. I would attribute it to years of indulgence into the writing style of some of my fav poets such as Shakespeare, Oscar Wilde, Edgar Allan Poe, Tolkien and Keats. Thank you for reading. π
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Me too on a lesser scale but I favor more contemporary novelists instead.
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So deep and heart touching…..i really like poetry
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Thank you for your kind words. I’m a big fan of poetry myself.
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WOW! This is absolutely breathtaking!!! Your eye for detail and captivating language do not disappoint. Amazing work!
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Thank you for your kind words. I tried :).
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Your welcome. π
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I gift you my love, time and youth…. very poignant words… you are very talented…
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Thank you, you are very kind π
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Nice poem. It’s beautiful and rhythmic and sad all at the same time.
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Thank you Priscilla :). Very grateful.
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I loved your prose. I fell flat on the the way you have expressed the details. More power to your pen. π
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Thank you Kavya. Much appreciated π
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Sublime
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Thank you for reading π
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So touching! The depth in your poems is really amazing, capturing small details that keep the reader captivated. Exceptional!
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Thank you. Iβm glad you feel this way about my poem. π
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Those awed gazes meant nothing –
For they did not come from you.
Great lines. They perfectly capture love on a one way street.
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Thank you. π Thatβs was so well stated. Best wishes. πΈ
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absolutely β‘
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Thank you for reading. π
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Touched , beautiful.
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Thank you so much. Iβm glad you liked my humble effort. π
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It us no humble effort, they are beautiful
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